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DangerousDemon
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Hi fellow posters,

For those who found it humerous to critque my spelling and grammer I will have you know that I run my own psychology clinic, tutor students at a melbourbne university, and do my own study doctorate in philopsophy to add to the masters of psychology and master of teaching that I have aldready obtained. For your information this post was written in about 5 minuts, in my break between clients and with much haste. Furthermore it was adressed to a particular person with whom I had a conversation on this site yesterday evening.I do applogise for spelling Bethams name incorrectly but surely you have more to occupy yourself with than this turthfully get a life.

For theose who bagged this post, if it was so uninticing then why did you bother reply or giving your feedback to it in the first place.For those who actually took the time to read it, the post made sense, for others who lack the interlect and backbone to winge and complain outside the bounds of this site I pitty you I really do. I was asked for my thoughts on Newton by another poster and I gave them end of story.

Bloody hell people are narrow minded

 
Hi fellow posters,

For those who found it humerous to critque my spelling and grammer I will have you know that I run my own psychology clinic, tutor students at a melbourbne university, and do my own study doctorate in philopsophy to add to the masters of psychology and master of teaching that I have aldready obtained. For your information this post was written in about 5 minuts, in my break between clients and with much haste. Furthermore it was adressed to a particular person with whom I had a conversation on this site yesterday evening.I do applogise for spelling Bethams name incorrectly but surely you have more to occupy yourself with than this turthfully get a life.

For theose who bagged this post, if it was so uninticing then why did you bother reply or giving your feedback to it in the first place.For those who actually took the time to read it, the post made sense, for others who lack the interlect and backbone to winge and complain outside the bounds of this site I pitty you I really do. I was asked for my thoughts on Newton by another poster and I gave them end of story.

Bloody hell people are narrow minded

All this stuff is a heaps of male chest beating. Why do you even react to it? just dont take it to heart and get over it. You dont need to tell us what you do to try prove your intellect.

Hi fellow posters,

.......Furthermore it was adressed to a particular person with whom I had a conversation on this site yesterday evening.I do applogise for spelling Bethams name incorrectly but surely you have more to occupy yourself with than this turthfully get a life.

For theose who bagged this post, if it was so uninticing then why did you bother reply or giving your feedback to it in the first place.For those who actually took the time to read it, the post made sense, for others who lack the interlect and backbone to winge and complain outside the bounds of this site I pitty you I really do. I was asked for my thoughts on Newton by another poster and I gave them end of story.

Bloody hell people are narrow minded

You could have emailed that person directly perhaps?

Why did we criticise your post? Firstly, because we can and secondly, despite your undoubted credentials, it made no sense and was pure self-indulgent twaddle.
 
Hi fellow posters,

For those who found it humerous to critque my spelling and grammer I will have you know that I run my own psychology clinic, tutor students at a melbourbne university, and do my own study doctorate in philopsophy to add to the masters of psychology and master of teaching that I have aldready obtained. For your information this post was written in about 5 minuts, in my break between clients and with much haste. Furthermore it was adressed to a particular person with whom I had a conversation on this site yesterday evening.I do applogise for spelling Bethams name incorrectly but surely you have more to occupy yourself with than this turthfully get a life.

For theose who bagged this post, if it was so uninticing then why did you bother reply or giving your feedback to it in the first place.For those who actually took the time to read it, the post made sense, for others who lack the interlect and backbone to winge and complain outside the bounds of this site I pitty you I really do. I was asked for my thoughts on Newton by another poster and I gave them end of story.

Bloody hell people are narrow minded

If you don't want to be shot at don't put your head over the parapet.....I transpose letters now and again as I type in a break....but for an educated man your spilling and understanding of grammer are atrocious..........besides we are all entitled to our opinion and as long as we can back up 'our' point of view......so what..............I never went to university so I feel I have nothing to apologise for..............I reiterate Newton's only problem is the lack of 'bottle' which interpreted from the local vernacular....means he has a heart problem........with a borderline case of intestinal fortitude.......a medical diagnosis of the first water........to watch a player who has obvious skill make poor attempts to get into a game he is being well paid to play is frustrating........

Bloody hell, mate; thin skinned or what? Or are you just baiting us to help you with your thesis.

I find some of the syntax and grammar on this forum to be atrocious; and that is the first time that I have ever been moved to say so.


Bloody hell, mate; thin skinned or what? Or are you just baiting us to help you with your thesis.

I find some of the syntax and grammar on this forum to be atrocious; and that is the first time that I have ever been moved to say so.

Only heard my grandfather use that word. Am I the only under 20 melbourne supporter? (sarcasm)

Surely this is just a [censored] take?
 

Hi fellow posters,

For those who found it humerous to critque my spelling and grammer I will have you know that I run my own psychology clinic, tutor students at a melbourbne university, and do my own study doctorate in philopsophy to add to the masters of psychology and master of teaching that I have aldready obtained. For your information this post was written in about 5 minuts, in my break between clients and with much haste. Furthermore it was adressed to a particular person with whom I had a conversation on this site yesterday evening.I do applogise for spelling Bethams name incorrectly but surely you have more to occupy yourself with than this turthfully get a life.

For theose who bagged this post, if it was so uninticing then why did you bother reply or giving your feedback to it in the first place.For those who actually took the time to read it, the post made sense, for others who lack the interlect and backbone to winge and complain outside the bounds of this site I pitty you I really do. I was asked for my thoughts on Newton by another poster and I gave them end of story.

Bloody hell people are narrow minded

Minutes has an 'e' in it.

Only heard my grandfather use that word. Am I the only under 20 melbourne supporter? (sarcasm)

Shouldn't that be - <sarcasm>Am I the only under 20 melbourne supporter?</sarcasm>

Shouldn't that be - <sarcasm>Am I the only under 20 melbourne supporter?</sarcasm>

Not if i wanted it to make sense.

Not if i wanted it to make sense.

Depending on your audience; to me it would make perfect sense and be syntactally correct. I am a web programmer and HTML and XML are second nature to me, which is why I chose to use 'syntax' instead of the more general 'spelling'.

If you want to take issue with another poster then PM them directly.

We don't need a new thread every time someone takes offence.


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